We

 

 

 

It’s raining …drop in drops… drop by drop.

Each drop like new born baby whining making sounds of me …me…me…

And then they reach the ground precipitated in the soil and shout …”We”

 

 

I carry you, you in me

The voices unknown enunciating we

Hindered, paused silhouette of I

Answering quintessential question of why

 

Mind is what, a monastery of child

Prayers so innocent, yet so wild

Phantom kites flies in fantasy

Flap its wings in rising ecstasy

 

Kept on each intermittent hair

Suspended silvery, dew drops that stare

Have lost in body a harrow

May be will find it sometime tomorrow

 

On crossroads of him, you, me and eyes

Enumerated scions full of vies

Is it real? Or is it a veil?

Plastic snow doesn’t melt yet gleam

 

A bit of you and a bit of me

The smell of soil and pouring ‘we’

Together ‘we’ are rather be

Hands having eyes that don’t see

It is a luminous cry on shadows of eternity

Or perhaps…perhaps an insane serendipity…

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36 thoughts on “We

  1. “Mind is what, a monastery of child

    Prayers so innocent, yet so wild…”

    lines i liked the best and the graphic is simply amazing…mind sharing where u got it from 😉 ???

  2. Uhmmm…i can easily say that this is one of ur best post.I and another I, but tofgether making the We…Individualistic…and den sacrificing their identities to become a bigger,stronger entity..sometimes which is real and sometimes an illusion..but still it is the WE that matters.

  3. The primary underlying idea in the poem is great. The unification of I’s into we is well done too.
    with your poems i always get such a blast of ideas in my head that i dont know what was ur line of thought when u wrote it..why u chose the words and imagery u did .
    Maybe u’d care to explain?

  4. firstly the image is gr8..
    secondly the imagery is gr8..as well…

    ME trans mutates into WE…
    Gradually…but surely..
    Surreal yet real..
    Multiple yet unique…
    at times they drape in care…
    at times they rape in malice..
    till despair, disgust, abomination!!
    But they still remain…
    and also ME the integral part of the WE..

    cheers…surely one of ur best

  5. Rashi: thanx rashi..well graphics..i guess got from flikr..thru blog of my friend Hidyn gems..actually i just save any pic i come across which is quite connecting to my thots..:) so have a good database..:)

    Akansha: he he thanx mate..still a surface encounter :)..but yet true..i and I make we..n yet they r so distributed

    Kaylee: oh thanks so much dear..:)

    Sophiagurl:thank u sis..well i will get back to u..

    Phoenix: well why?..the intensity of life’s happenings is too much profound i guess..n i guess when this stops..the words will also stop..n so the imagery..
    the idea of this will be like revealing alot about me..but epitome of this is how much divided is the self is..the more i dwell into it the more it gives the feeling of schizophrenic part…may times disintegrated and yet we move in single I.and about the explanation of poem is u say..then i guess this is not the place 🙂

    Sweetgirl: good to c u back:) thanx 🙂

    Keshi: thanx keshi so much 🙂

    Sneha: thanx 🙂
    wow! thats was great
    to add
    enervated rocks of jungle they turn
    bigger the boulder larger they turn..
    🙂

  6. Contemplating self
    loosing sight
    fighting the “I”
    wanting the “me” to survive
    contemplating still…

    the imagination is wild, the words are nearer still…amazing imagination.

  7. Rain brings so many pleasure and memories with it…
    And what a co-incidence its raining in delhi very hardly…..
    and am enjoying seeing it…

    beautfiful words and ya the pis is just great..

    Take care

  8. whoa! that was brilliant! great job..beautiful imagery.. it seems to weave an amazingly accurate n surreal picture.. n i love the idea behind the poem.. your blogger names so apt! 🙂

  9. Pretty detailed blog you got here….i’ve always been kinda doubtful to switch to wordpress…i like the over all look of what you have here….and the picture is spooky…i mean what is a man doing inside another man’s mouth! ha ha…

    good work man, i got your feed on, i’ll be back for reading!
    🙂

    N

    A Story A Day

  10. imagine if the i wouldnt exist
    they why wouldnt exist…
    thanks so much for the award…
    i am completely unworthy…

    but flattered…
    —-
    and dude that picture completely kills the poem…

  11. oh God !! I am just so scared to see this foto n cant dare to see this page again hence havent read the post, please do write the next post soon so this post goes out of mysight 😦

    At my end, Nothing specific just being busy n bored of work n travel 😦
    Trying to regain the lost enthu soon..

    Cheers !!

  12. On crossroads of him, you, me and eyes
    Enumerated scions full of vies
    Is it real? Or is it a veil?
    Plastic snow doesn’t melt yet gleam

    love these lines…wonderful words, tho’ the pic cud make me puke 😛 lolzz

  13. schizophrenia?????????
    no not quite that…..[a bit of you, a bit of me][sound of pouring we]
    y do we have to complicate reality by calling it schizophrenic?

  14. The smell of soil and pouring ‘we’

    Together ‘we’ are rather be

    Hands having eyes that don’t see

    It is a luminous cry on shadows of eternity

    Or perhaps…perhaps an insane serendipity…

    amazing lines….i keep ocming back to read it….:)
    if i get the OST of the bong connection will pass it on..

  15. Insane serendipity it indeed is when the divine epiphanies suddenly manifest themselves and then sit back and wonder whether WE = I or am I just another befuddled schizophrenic .

  16. Shouting for attenttion..me, me, me then merging into a we! amazing lines….
    Mind a monastory of a child…beautiful!!! Need i say anything more? Brilliant post.

  17. i liked particulary this part : ” A bit of you and a bit of me

    The smell of soil and pouring ‘we’

    Together ‘we’ are rather be”

    the picture is a bit weird but interesting for this great poem, I identify myself here.

  18. Anupama😆 yeah wild but real:)

    Shruti: thanx 🙂 but the poem ws not about rain ..it was jst metaphor and personification

    Jattz: thanx bro..:)

    Utopia: thanx a bunch 🙂

    Aman: bro u flatter me..:) thanx alot..n do give ur feedback how was the movie

    rajarshi: All the best bro 🙂

    Pegasus: thanx aot..welcome to my world 🙂

    Nothingman: thanx mate..thats an honour..btw trust me u wldn’t want to try wordpress..its got so much restriction..with the knowledge of CSS this place is waste…there are many restrictions here

    Neo: Thanx:)

    Pricky: u very well deserve that..n better put that thing in ur blog..have not seen it yet otherwise gonna kick u

    Aadee: oops sorry ..dnt wry i have put another post above this ..it wont bother now:)

    Lass: hey welcome mate..thanx..well about the pic..it does give a yuck feeling but it was kinda close to this..

    Deepti: oh u r saying this…well we need not complicate..its already complicated..not by calling it that…inside it feels disintegrated…with every bit having voice of his own..has own emotions..

    Raka: thanx so much..yeah please send it my mail id if u get the OST i will b soooooooo greatful to u 🙂

    whatsinaname: u every well caught me..left lot of thing unsaid..sa its better that way..otherwise i wld have been jeopardizing the whole meaning of this..while writing this i felt m going some way other ..n then i jst put my pen on hold..

  19. oracle: bull’s eye 😀 ..buddy do drop ur link..

    Nikita: well thanx for saying so much..he he

    Ankit: thanx so much mate:)

    ceruleus : thanx 🙂 well if u comng back i mite b disapponiting for a while…anways when i come back will ping u for sure

    Soul&body: ohhh thank u so much..it means alot

  20. hey i loved this poem of yours…u must make a compilation soon and publish it 🙂
    and yeah..that story that i wrote on my blog…its my first…i got inspired by people who have such amazing posts around here.. i donno if i can ask…but how can u realte to the story? dont answer if u dont wish too! n ya im adding u to my blogroll

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