Anathema-II

Anathema [Part-1]

PART-2 Continues…

How good it is to be good. What makes an anathema? Our egalitarian society judges people by morale, by prudence, by insanity, by technicality, by rationality, by acuity and terms the negative sigma of all to be a pariah. Is it so?? Is It the reality we live in we seek in. Well then a second look perhaps becomes necessary to evaluate the mere fundamentals of judging the society discretion.

Society detests those who are good whose morality is good and the follower of the light are termed as ANATHEMA.

Saahil life’s story has many curvilinear bends. Since his childhood he has been taught and been inducted with high morale and self belief. Uhmmm well almost..almost all parents do so.. So what makes it special? The specialty is that there is nothing special. But perhaps Saahil is a rare occurrence as something we bequeathed or bequeath eventually has still stayed on with him.

A meritorious student he was. Very early in life he learned not to share his burden and keep it with him. His brother just a year younger was diagnosed with an incurable disease. He didn’t know about it then but knew that something was wrong when his brother decided not to walk one day. He used to see his mom silently crying behind the curtains sometimes. So the conscious mind of child decided not to trouble his mother and never to share his trouble. He made a promise to himself that whatever comes he needs to keep his mom happy .Days went by and Saahil grew up and got into engineering school.

It was just another day of June. saahil was at home just finished with his second year exams. His friend asked him to search for any project assistance with any professor so as to utilize the time. Excited by the prospects he started spending time on net and searching for prof email id. For few days this process continued but with no success. Jus for fun he deided man why not have a pen fried instead of wasting time on these guys who never reply.

CLICK! www. penpalsnow.com/ . Enter. Made a profile looked into a few and mailed a few. After 3 days a reply..cheers!

got ur letter

quick facts—i’m 18 going 2 be 19 soon.i’m in kerala and ya its a tourist spot and no its not a hip and happening place. Currently under house arrest coz dad wants me 2 be a doc and after 18 years of saying yes one fine morning I said ”lemme think about it”.

I live with mom, sis and my pet dog scooby[ i named him after the cartoon. no prizes 4 guessing].dads an electrical engineer presently in abu dhabi.

its 12:30 am and why am i up so late? dads paranoid about me falling in love and mom is 2 keep a guard on me. Studied in a girl’s school all my life, popular there but when it comes 2 talking 2 guys i am at a total loss. Either i shut up altogether or worse—I talk about stupid things nonstop looking like a complete idiot.

So before i enter a college i have 2 sort out this problem. so i guessed the net would be the perfect for this. mom is in the resting mode right now.in other words there wont be a pair of eyes spying on me.

dont worry i’m not looking 4 a boyfriend.and i’m sorry if i’m boring u.

MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE? tell more about urself in ur next letter. if u dont want 2 be my friend send me a nasty letter. dont forget 2 reply anyway

—Kavya .

 

 

to be continued…

P.S This is my first long story so I might go boring and loose flow … So please excuse I m trying my best to avoid unnecessary details and KISS- keep it simple stupid 🙂 one more word to add..I wanna specially thanks to Guptaghost a fellow blogger who wrote a poem for me ..check this out DreamCatcher

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24 thoughts on “Anathema-II

  1. nah nah…not bored yet…waiting for the next installment…

    i like the.
    if u dont want 2 be my friend send me a nasty letter. dont forget 2 reply anyway..
    cheers

  2. well, all i can say is, that the talk of it getting boring definitely seems to be going nowhere, what with the KISS working :).

    and on a more serious note, society doesn’t consider anything anathema because there is no society in the first place. there is this loose, highly elastic conglomeration of people called society by all and sundry. mores and morals are basically restrictions imposed by our own, in anticipation of the restricted action earning the displeasure of those that they know or those that they believe matter, or those that wield some kind of control over our relatives lives.

    and it is this need for acceptance(conversely also translating into avoidance of social rejection) that actually establishes most of the morals that people believe society imposes on them. to break them would be to risk acceptance, but then, what matters is who breaks them.

    so do continue, seems to get interesting by the day.

  3. hmmmm
    why both of us r in storytelling modes these days…
    m ok, but wats wrong wid u
    and yes, it is interesting, as of now
    🙂
    hans de yaar

  4. @humbl devil, sophiagurl,darkling,raka,abhishekIs that so?? jst wait n watch then 😉

    @Snehaha ha thanx ,,aage dekhte hai…abhi to shuruaat hai..i guess later on i will surely get brickbats 🙂

  5. @guptaghost: I was expecting this kind comment from u ;)..thanx for following it so far

    society I have taken here as a collective noun..to jumle up them in a group..n mind u this percentage of ppl is way higher

    “there is this loose, highly elastic conglomeration of people called society by all and sundry. mores and morals are basically restrictions imposed by our own, in anticipation of the restricted action earning the displeasure of those that they know or those that they believe matter, or those that wield some kind of control over our relatives lives.”

    elastic..well i guess we can say so ..but does it stretches itself..does it let ourselves stretch it..i dont think so…conglomeration..yeah it is a conglomeration .. a heap..but not elastic i guess…
    if u make it elastic..u make it moral….in a superficial sense i agree that it adjusts itself..anyways

    society is always a thid person view..we always keep ourselves out of that…hmm in my case i mean…rest agreed with u..word by word mate..

    btw whole point of mentioning in perspective of anathema is that…those who r morale r thwarted by society..n we say morality is acceptable….purity of soul is curse..nevertheless..i hope m making a point..have tried to..

  6. @adi:he he he 😀 will b following ur story..hey nothing wrong..u u said so..huggs..thanx yaar

    @Rajeev:hey i was messaged u in facebook..:) by fault i mass forwarded that to everyone..:) glad u came here..

    @Ashish:ha ha checkmate 😉

    @ani:thanx motee…needed that

  7. elastic..well i guess we can say so ..but does it stretches itself..does it let ourselves stretch it..i dont think so…conglomeration..yeah it is a conglomeration .. a heap..but not elastic i guess…

    what i meant by elastic is, its ability to ignore some great weaknesses of a select few, for whom it will forgive(rather choose to forget) every kind of absurd degenerative actions, while it refuses to tolerate even the smallest of digressions by normal people.

    its elasticity co-effecient is directly proportionate to the media-friendliness that the person commands. dont you think that is elastic enough. i mean though there is no such thing as a universal elasticity co-efficient, it does make allowances for each person’s deformities, to the limit that each society can bear(i use each society, because it is obvious that every person has their own society, since each one has a relatively different of relatives, so the amount of elasticity depends on the flexibility of each one’s society.) you may find it funny, that though we use society as a collective noun, we all live in a billion societies, for is not each one a society unto himself(stems from my belief that we are only answerable to ourselves and no one else).

    and regarding the domain, am ready whenever you are, just buzz me, when you feel the time is right(muhurat 🙂 )

  8. hi

    🙂 im a regular reader of your blog and i think you would make an amazing contributor to this new ezine a bunch of my friends and i have started. its a collaborative effort between both pakistani and indian youngsters with common interests in highlighting amazing talent be it in writing, reporting or photography and providing people with a forum to showcase their work! id love to have you on board. im certain that in time we shall make something to be proud of.

    the first few editions are out at
    http://www.exnihilomagazine.wordpress.com

    🙂 do check it out and contact me at demesne@gmail.com if interested at all!

    id love to have you on board!
    mesh

    http://www.reflectiveintrospection.blogspot.com

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