Munaasib nahi ek pal ki hassi koi
hai tammanaon pe nazar khoi mitra
raahat nahi milti ab khud ko behlaane par bhi
jo mausam ki harkat pe machle ye dil mitra
kuch sitaaro mein hai mile….bandishein mausam ki
kuch halke se sifar ka aashiyana dikhe
hai roshan kinnaro mein kahi teri nazar
Jaha mulaqaato ka silsala sa lage
Dhundh mein chupa nasha hai kahi
Muddat se hote maikhaane viraan mitra
Koshish khabar karte ab firaaq ke ehasaas ka
Har shaam umeedo ke sirhaane jo guzre mitra
Yuhi to pashemaan nahi lafz mere soz ki
Yuhi to nadaan-e-dil dua jo kare
Kabhi zikar hua hoga “saahil” ka kahi
Pyaasa tabhi meri yaadon ka karvaan sa lage…
- Mitra -friend
- Munaasib- proper/suitable/fit/apt
- tammana – Desire
- Behlaana- Consoling by cheering someone
- Harkat- action
- Bandishein- constraints
- Aashiyan- house
- Silsila- chain/series
- Maikhaane – Bar
- Viraan – deserted
- firaaq -zero
- pashemaan -ashamed
- lafz -words
- soz -passion
- saahil – coast
- yaadein – memories
- karvaan – caravan
P.S: pic is taken from IIM Shillong’s classroom 🙂 weather was just awesome! who would believe its summer time. Though my project presentation was going on couldn’t stop myslef from writing these verses
The Augmented Reality 
am jealous…
you were lucky to get the window seat 😦
and even more lucky you did not get caught taking the pic 😛
@Sarvesh :Tch..Tch well ya lucky I guess..the way Anjan cellphone got caught..ha ha it was damn funny!
Gr8 to see ur comment! finally!! kuch to likha 😀
At first reading the word mitra actually sounded outofplace in a peppering of urdu words, but I guess it does make a nice fusion.
Doing well these days?
beautiful words n most certainly beauyiful weather you have..
m just trying to imagine how wonderful ‘ll it be to live in a place like this..
i think i envy u..
Njoy..!
Nice poem dude !!!!
Har ore jab nazara,
Haqeeqat bante armano sa lagta ho,
koi kaise na bane shayar,
Jab shahar afsaano sa lagta ho!!
(my instant reaction to the pic and the poem)
@Phoenix: M fine ..err i guess jst alive 😐 things r bit tough nowadays..i guess may b thats y could come back to blogging
@deepika: yup :)if u take out acads part..this is just awesome place to be
@Abhishek: Thanks bro
@Shashank: *claps* kya baat hai huzoor.. come sometime to shillong too..Indore mein hi rahoge kya?
Hello,
You really write mind blowing poems…full of depth..!!
Good one 🙂
Shivani (PG)
bilkul sirjee, hum to wahan aane ko atyant utsuk hain…..mauka milte hi aapke darshanarth pahuch jayenge… 🙂
What an awesome poetry to match the weather!
Kudos to you.
Visiting first time and Wow !! Lovely pic and amazingly described. .. I specially loved that you took the time to explain the words that are tough …
Cheers,
adisha
Splendid….as much as it can be!
beautifully written!!
loved the pic as well 🙂
@All: Thanks alot for appreciating it
loved it.. keep it up.
Thanks 🙂 keep visiting
Awesome pome.. Just a suggestion(please ignore if you can) – instead of Mitra try the word Dost, because mitra is closer to hindi but Dost is closer to urdu as are most words of the piece!
Still beautiful nonetheless!
(arrived here from Indiblogger and am voting for your – because you can weave words in both english and hindi)