Amanat

surkh si khushi hai..nadaan si zaroorat
dheere dheere saaso ko bhi ho chuki ek muddat
aasmano ke pare..kahi khil sa raha ek..foool
kaise kahe hai kya..kah do to tum ho na kaho to nazaakkat

thodi si karne ka dil karta hai ek shrarat..
badmash ye ..na farmaan sab.. ungliyo par likhte hai ek nasihat

kadmo pe kadm rakh ke chalna..
thodi dabti..kuch ruthati..
har arzoo ki..ek choti si chahat

chahat..ke dhaage ka sira..
baandhe apne haathon me.rakha hai
teri nazdeekiyo ki amanat

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14 thoughts on “Amanat

  1. bhavna: chalo koi to hamare is gumnaam nishabd raah par bhi bhatke aata hai..ha ha

    aisa to nahi hia mohtarma…khhobsoorati to aakho ki chaya hai..aapne aisa dekhato ho gaya :D..

    thanx a bunch

  2. mujhe hindi mein likhna to nahi aata lekin aapne jo tasveer lagayi hai aur jin shabdo ka upyog kiya hai, vo padhke to koi bhi pyar karna chahega…

    beautiful…

  3. rashi: 🙂 sirf ek muskurahat hai ab to

    Me thinks: aapki hindi bilkul sahi hai ..although i knw u dont write hindi..par jo bhi kaha dil ko choo gayi..

    pyaar kaun nahi karna chahta..bas milta kaha hai janaab…ha ha…

    ye shabd shayad rundhe gale se nikali kuch baatein hai..

    ok the secret of this poem is i was doing night shift or mene bahot din baad sunrise dekha..bas usi waqt i wrote few lines..:)

  4. “chahat..ke dhaage ka sira..
    baandhe apne haathon me.rakha hai
    teri nazdeekiyo ki amanat”

    jee lenge aur ek zindagi..
    fir ek baar marr jayenge,
    puchna mat,na keh payenge..
    amanat ho amanat ki,
    ro lenge thoda, aur thoda chupaenge…

  5. kaylee Its in hindi other language..:)

    Nikita cry..kyo..??

    Ekta

    chupa ke kai raaz thodi doori ki samjh hai
    koshish karte hame marne ki zeena ek dard hai

    poochte nahi bar rokna shab ki raho ko
    ek zariya savera dhoodhne ka sabab hai..

    m mesmerized by ur way 🙂

  6. “kadmo pe kadm rakh ke chalna..
    thodi dabti..kuch ruthati..
    har arzoo ki..ek choti si chahat”

    aur unhi chahaton ki ek choti si arzoo..
    halke kadmon se paas aati hai,
    muskura ka,r fir wohi meetha sa dard de jaati hai..
    dard dena inse seekho..,
    dard lena ke bahane toh de jaati hai..

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